Snow ([info]sweptawaybayou) wrote,
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Drabble Request

Snow on Skin

David Boreanaz/Christian Kane
R
not mine

For [info] who requested ~ I just know that someone wants to have sex in the snow. and [info]alanna_zero ~ David/Chris. Kisses. Missing each other.

400 words

I know I left too much mess and
destruction to come back again
And I caused nothing but trouble.
I understand if you can't talk to me again
And if you live by the rules of "it's over"
then I'm sure that that makes sense.

I will go down with this ship
And I won't put my hands up and surrender.
There will be no white flag above my door.




There really wasn't any snow in Texas.

When he moved to Oklahoma the winters were harsh and windy and cold. Snow only came with dreams and in white-out blizzards that broke pipes and closed school but didn't leave enough behind to enjoy. Not that Chris had all that much to love about being the cousin and the house-guest. The one without real family around the dinner table.

Ten winters later and a million miles from being the one that wasn't wanted. Inside with a fire burning under a mantel. Warm with hundred-dollar jeans on his legs, cotton and flannel over his shoulders and a thick, new sheepskin and suede coat. Well-fed and much admired and snow fell on the other side of the windows.

He had a bottle of Jack and a cigarette in his lips when he stepped out into the night. It wasn't dark. He'd never seen anything like it. The temperature stole the warmth trapped under his clothes, it fogged his breath. Crystals floated down from a moonlit black sky. They landed on his face, on his eyelids, on his lips and tongue as he tasted the snow and the moon reflected up into the trees that surrounded him.

“Nice coat.”

The voice from behind was as familiar as his own. The hands that slid up and under the suede moved as if they owned what they touched. And Chris supposed that they did. Own him.

Warm air behind one ear. Blowing through his long hair. Lips touched the silver and turquoise. Wet tongue just there... and there...

Breath flavored with smoke and whiskey, time and blondes and a child. Another show. Another space. Another world apart from his.

Sex in the snow was cold. It was wet. It was fast and hard and it hurt. Tears froze on Chris' cheeks. Lost somewhere between eyes and lips. The orgasm came too quick and he was left wanting more, wanting something...

Jeans pulled up. Jockeys wet. Cocks still hard.

Used to last longer. Used to take longer. Used to have time.

They used to make time.

But there was the same smile. Those strong arms. That damn net pulling him deeper and Chris gave up that last of his oxygen in a steam covered breath.

“You always come back.”

David smiled.

“You're always there.”


;)
Tags: db/ck, drabbles, rps

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  • 34 comments

[info]tabaqui

March 24 2007, 22:43:57 UTC 5 years ago

Sex in the snow was cold. It was wet. It was fast and hard and it hurt. Tears froze on Chris' cheeks. Lost somewhere between eyes and lips. The orgasm came too quick and he was left wanting more, wanting something...

Oooh, pretty, pretty, pretty. No - *gorgeous*. I love that.
Yeees, just...love.
:)
*smooch*

[info]sweptawaybayou

March 24 2007, 23:26:31 UTC 5 years ago

*adores*

Thank you, Tabi. And thank you for the *picture* of Chris sitting by the window, wrapped in a coat. Next time? Make him naked under the coat for me.

*la*

**luffs you endlessly**

[info]tabaqui

5 years ago

[info]tabaqui

5 years ago

[info]stretfordditto

March 24 2007, 22:46:13 UTC 5 years ago

Wonderful.

[info]sweptawaybayou

March 24 2007, 23:25:10 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you!!

*hugshugs*

[info]lostakasha

March 24 2007, 22:49:31 UTC 5 years ago

Snow and those pretty, pretty boys are just too good to resist.

Nobody does it better. Period.

Oh, and did I say... guh! Because ... yes.

[info]sweptawaybayou

March 24 2007, 23:24:32 UTC 5 years ago

Hee!

You are, as usual, way too kind. But I love you for it. Heck ... I just love you.

;)

**smooches hard**

[info]_divya_

March 24 2007, 22:49:43 UTC 5 years ago

Buh. Buh. Buh. GAH. ♥

[info]sweptawaybayou

March 24 2007, 23:23:44 UTC 5 years ago

*tackles you*

Thank you, Di!!!

**adores you**

[info]hurry_sundown

March 24 2007, 23:02:09 UTC 5 years ago

Christ on a cracker, I love the way you write them. It hurtshurtshurts, but then the endorphins kick in and omg it is fine.

“You always come back.”

“You're always there.”


Sometimes I'd like to slap Chris in the head with one hand and punch David's lights out with the other.

[info]sweptawaybayou

March 24 2007, 23:23:02 UTC 5 years ago

*smoooooooches you*

Thank you, babe.

Yeah. They hurt me too, but in such a gooooooood way.

:)

**dances with you**

[info]denied_heaven

March 25 2007, 00:32:43 UTC 5 years ago

*swallows*
*shivers*
...
gorgeous and aching and just..
*sigh*
loves them

[info]sweptawaybayou

March 25 2007, 01:06:20 UTC 5 years ago

Wheee!!

Thank you!

So glad you liked this.

:)

**smoooooooooooches you**

[info]nyghtpet

March 25 2007, 00:44:39 UTC 5 years ago

*wibbles and falls over*
I missed your ck/db. MAN.
*claps*
*whimpers*
*hugs them to pieces*
*hugs YOU to pieces*
AWESOME!

[info]sweptawaybayou

March 25 2007, 01:05:35 UTC 5 years ago

*dances with you*

yayay!!

Thank you, babe! Thank you so much.

:)

[info]anonymous_sibyl

March 25 2007, 00:51:05 UTC 5 years ago

Sex in the snow was cold. It was wet. It was fast and hard and it hurt.

Oh, yes. Rowr.

You make these two live.

[info]sweptawaybayou

March 25 2007, 01:05:01 UTC 5 years ago

*twirls you*

Thank you, babe. I'm so so so very happy that this worked for you. Thank you for the prompt.

:D

**smooooches**

[info]menomegirl

March 25 2007, 03:14:08 UTC 5 years ago

Gorgeous and beautiful, Snow. You can do more with a drabble than anyone else I know and I'm in awe, as always.

Those last lines were exquisite and brought tears to my eyes.

xx

[info]sweptawaybayou

March 25 2007, 19:48:36 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you, Dee.

I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this.

*twirls you*

[info]blueswan9

March 25 2007, 03:36:40 UTC 5 years ago

Oh, boys.

An aching, gorgeous fic. Lovely.

[info]sweptawaybayou

March 25 2007, 19:47:35 UTC 5 years ago

yay!!

Thank you, Lori!

*luffs hard*

[info]jstabe

March 25 2007, 15:11:32 UTC 5 years ago

Gorgeous. Nobody writes these two the way you do. I've missed your David and your Chris.

[info]sweptawaybayou

March 25 2007, 19:46:56 UTC 5 years ago

jenn!!

*tacklegrabrollgrope*

Thank you. So very much.

;)

**pours you tequila**

[info]alanna_zero

March 25 2007, 15:31:54 UTC 5 years ago

YAY!!!

I love this to pieces. Your writing is so perfect :)

[info]sweptawaybayou

March 25 2007, 19:45:27 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you!!!

*twirls you wildly*

I'm so glad you enjoyed your drabble!

**hugshugshugs**

[info]chlare

March 25 2007, 18:04:27 UTC 5 years ago

Ahh, that's the stuff.

The temperature stole the warmth trapped under his clothes, it fogged his breath. Crystals floated down from a moonlit black sky.

Always, the great scene set-up...

The voice from behind was as familiar as his own. The hands that slid up and under the suede moved as if they owned what they touched. And Chris supposed that they did. Own him.

and then the rough rawness of the relationship,

with the touchdown of hotness and sweetness at the end. Love it. Like always. :D

[info]sweptawaybayou

March 25 2007, 19:44:43 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you, Chlare!

So very much.

*adores*

[info]viciouswishes

March 27 2007, 19:00:27 UTC 5 years ago

Damn that was pretty. :)

[info]sweptawaybayou

March 31 2007, 22:25:59 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you!

*luffs hard*

xoxo

[info]redbrickrose

March 28 2007, 06:19:24 UTC 5 years ago

oooo. Nice. This was the RPS I read when I didn't read RPS. (I know I've said that before). I love the way you write them; it's always so vivid!

[info]sweptawaybayou

March 31 2007, 22:26:52 UTC 5 years ago

*twirls you*

Thank you, babe. So very much. Your feedback and thoughts always make my day.

**hugs you tight**
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